carte blanche

Hello there, I'm here again from !


This drawing is very eye-catching even though I personally don't like pink/magenta but I like this image. Maybe because it fits for this scene, the space as it is a colorful place. I would like to make some minor remarks on how the photo is presented, if you don't have a scanner and have to photograph your drawings (it happens to me too when I post to instagram), try to place the drawing on an even surface and not on a patterned carpet or such. Try to make it in a way that nothing is on the photo but the drawing. It may seem like a little thing but it counts, here some of the drawing's edges blend into the environment which is not ideal to show an artwork. Now back onto the drawing, you got better at the composition, you fit the pink ninja figure (I am not sure what it is exactly at the left corner) well into the picture without cropping any parts However, be aware of the tangent line at her hand, it does not look like she is sitting on a planet because of this though it's clear you had this intention. You could try to place the line of the horizon lower so that it looks like the character is reaching out into space. That way the figure could pop out. I like how you drew the Earth but I think the space overall could use a bigger contrast. You could use some black or really dark blue at some parts of the open space and the contrast between the space and stars would be better. (Also this would make clear that there is that black matter in the universe, even though it is not known what exactly it is but it should be depicted )

Anyway I hope you find my comment helpful, keep up the good work, you are improving!